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Re: Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Fri May 21, 2004 2:13 am

Awww..cute update. Wonderful :love . And to answer your question..hehe..it's justkazy:love :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Against The Wind

Postby WillowFever » Fri May 21, 2004 9:41 pm

Hello my sweet little kittens.....I thought I would go ahead and post this tonight...I will respond to everyone a little later....Hope you enjoy.....as always....Happy Reading...



Oh yeah....I'd like to give a shout out to my beta....LOL....luv ya....





Enjoy,





WF:pride







Wild Horses

By

WillowFever





Part 34:        Against The Wind





The unmistakable sound of a helicopter engine firing up broke the hungry kiss between Willow and Tara. They stood smiling at one another as the air around them crackled from the excitement flowing between them.



“I think that’s our cue…”



Tara nodded and grabbed Willow’s hand and headed out of the barn. She couldn’t wait to get off the ground and get a birds-eye view of the wild horses living free on the reservation. It was something she had always dreamed of and here she walked, hand-in-hand with her beloved across the paved lot to the helicopter.



How did my life take a turn towards heaven



She looked over at Willow who was smiling ear to ear. There was no one else on earth Tara would rather have shared this moment with. She squeezed Willow’s hand as they made their way into the office; neither one letting go of the other.



“Hey…”



The two girls said their hello’s to Sarah once again and waited to see what they needed to do. As if on cue, a voice rang over the radio signaling to the main office that the chopper was ready to be loaded.



Sarah took the two women through a back exit and sitting on the giant helicopter pad was a bright yellow chopper. The three of them ran to the chopper and Sarah showed them where to board. They strapped in and found themselves even more excited once they found out that they could communicate through their helmets.



They watched as Sarah ran back to the office and gave the thumbs up sign to Mike. S



“Are you girls ready?”



Mike watched two very happy heads bob up and down. Willow watched as the earth faded farther and farther away. She looked over and found Tara looking far off into the distance. Her blue eyes already searching for the wild horses.



She’s an angel



The helicopter steadily carried the two girls over hills and valleys. They could easily see the creeks and waterways that flowed through the land below. The colorful wildflowers that dotted the plains and the pine groves that served as a sometimes-temporary shelter from wind, rain and heat.



“Beautiful…”



Willow’s words rang in Tara’s ears, causing the blonde to look at her lover. Willow’s eyes were fixed on the blonde and Tara could see love shining at her through those emerald gems.



She mouthed the words I love you and watched as Willow returned the sentiment.



“Okay ladies…we’ve got some mustangs up here on the left…”



Tara leaned over to get the best possible view she could. She felt her heart swell as the horses came into view. There had to be at least forty or fifty in the herd grazing in the meadow below them.



The pilot passed over the herd and swung back around. As he did so the rumbling of the propeller spooked the horses and caused them to take off running.



“Willow…look at them…”



Willow looked on in awe at the sight below her. The horses were running against the wind with their mane and tail swishing in the air around them. She could almost imagine what it must have been like hundreds of years ago…long before reservations were needed when these majestic animals roamed wild and free from captivity. In that instant she understood how Tara could so easily fall in love with horses.



“They’re amazing…”



Willow looked over at her lover and saw tears streaming down Tara’s face. She knew that a part of the blonde’s heart was down there running wild and carefree with those horses.



Run…Tara…run…



Tara felt Willow’s fingers entwine with her own. She quickly looked over and smiled in an effort to reassure the red head.



“I know baby…I know…”



Tara looked back down as she wiped the tears from her cheeks. Willow had single handily made a dream come true for her. She would never forget this moment as long as she lived and she vowed to somehow find a way to give back to Willow this amazing feeling that she felt deep inside.



The chopper followed the herd for a short distance before heading on out. They circled the reservation and saw many other smaller herds but nothing compared to the first group they saw.



The pilot announced that it was time to head back to the office and slowly swung the chopper around. He told them about the different areas they were flying over and how the horses had come to live on the reservation. Both, Willow and Tara listened in rapt attention as Mike explained how the safe-haven for the horses had came into existence.



Before they knew it they had landed back at the office and were now climbing out of the helicopter.



“Thanks Mike…that was the most amazing thing ever…”



“Your welcome…you girls come back any time.”



“We will…”



They walked through the office and back out the front and climbed into their car. Willow wondered why Tara was so silent, but she figured the blonde was somewhat saddened by the thought of leaving…or maybe just overwhelmed with the whole experience.



I hope she’s not sad…just overwhelmed…but not in a bad way…a good way…



Willow put the car in gear and took out down the long lane. As they rounded the corner and made their way down to the main highway Tara looked reached over and put her hand on Willow’s leg.



“Pull over…”



“What?”



Willow looked at Tara to make sure she had heard her correctly.



“Pull over…”



The red head quickly pulled the car to the side of the lane.



Oh my god…she’s sick…I knew it…it’s bad…bad overwhelming…



Willow barely had time to put the car in park before Tara had climbed over and sat straddling the red head. Tara captured Willow’s lips in a fierce kiss as she claimed the red head as her own. Her tongue sliding not so softly into Willow’s mouth caused the red head to moan in pleasure. Tara deepened the kiss further as she felt Willow’s hands cup her backside.



Willow felt Tara’s hips slowly start to move against her.



this is good…very good overwhelming…oh yeah…



Slowly Tara brought the kiss to a less passionate fury to a more gentle exploration.



“I love you….thank you so much for today…”



Willow tried to catch her breath.



“I love you too…”



Tara’s arms were wrapped around Willow’s neck and she couldn’t help but giggle as she looked down and smiled sheepishly at her position.



“Sorry….I just…couldn’t help myself…”



Willow just smiled as she gave a little squeeze to the two hand-full’s of Tara that she still cupped firmly.



“You don’t ever have to apologize…I’m yours for the taking…”



Tara smiled playfully at her lover.



“Oh really….”



Willow swallowed hard at the hungry look in Tara’s eyes. The sun would soon be setting and both Willow and Tara knew that the night held the promise of tender caresses and soft kisses.



“I’ve created a monster…”



Tara just smiled at her lover.



“You have no idea…”



“Maybe not…yet! But the night is young Miss Maclay…”



Tara reluctantly made her way back to her seat.



“So it is lover…so it is…”



tbc….



WillowFever
 


Re: Against The Wind

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Fri May 21, 2004 9:53 pm

Hey Rach ... This update actually gave me chills... when Tara is crying and the way Willow was so affectionate with her, knowing she made her happy.:heart



Looks like naughty Tara is about to make another appearance, not that I am complaining in any way.:devil . (Seems to remind me of someone, though I can not place whom that is, any idea, Rach?) :lol



As usual, wonderful update!



~Mikaelah



P.S. You are quite welcome, hun.

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: Against The Wind

Postby Apache138 » Fri May 21, 2004 11:16 pm

Rachel



What else to say but beautiful.



Chills here as well.



Again, thank you.



Take care,



Dena





Apache138
 


Re: Re: Against The Wind

Postby wimpy0729 » Sat May 22, 2004 12:00 am

Okay, you got me too, chills and heart palpitations. So beautiful.



And I really think my ears turned a deep crimson. I don't recall seeing any steam, but it wouldn't have surprised me! Whew!



And the Queen Tease rears her crowned head! You're gonna just leave us waiting...and wanting...more :heart



Hugs!

Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: Re: Against The Wind

Postby justkazy » Sat May 22, 2004 5:37 am

OMG:thud



that update was so beautiful..and yes chills..hehe



thank you:flower hope i can get the same reaction out of my baby when i see her again:wink



awesome writing again:clap



:D



*ps.oh god baby..yes!:flirt *

"I'd cry..i would die if i lost you"-Alex Parks...I love you, baby!

Edited by: justkazy at: 5/22/04 3:12 pm
justkazy
 


you know what!

Postby photographer02 » Sat May 22, 2004 9:03 am

Hi,



Great update!! :applause :applause :applause



You know what!



After you have completed this story, I'm sooooo going to save it in my computer and print it out as one of my stories collection!! I love every minute of it!!!!;)



Please update soon!



Sincerely,

photographer02

photographer02
 


Re: you know what!

Postby sam darls » Sat May 22, 2004 10:20 am

Rachel..ooh, chills here too :heart . I loved it. Love sam.

P.S: Baby, I'm sure you will :flirt ..hehe.

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: you know what!

Postby veiled isis moon » Sat May 22, 2004 1:17 pm

The straddling was very good indeed, gave me butterflies!



I'm glad they had such a great time up there in the helicopter and Willow is a sweetheart for doing that for her, awwwwww.



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: you know what!

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Sat May 22, 2004 4:36 pm

I have to agree with Michelle......

Straddling...always a good thing...



Great story!!!



xoxo

Emms

MissKittys Ball O Yarn
 


Re: Amazing

Postby marciam » Sat May 22, 2004 11:37 pm

Quote:
Willow looked over at her lover and saw tears streaming down Tara’s face. She knew that a part of the blonde’s heart was down there running wild and carefree with those horses.



Run…Tara…run…




You captured this so beautifully. And then you had me lauging with:



Quote:
Willow felt Tara’s hips slowly start to move against her.



this is good…very good overwhelming…oh yeah…






The way you move through different emotions, and every one is so powerful, is just amazing.



Looking forward to the next update. :)



Marcia

marciam
 


Re: Amazing

Postby Marilda » Sat May 22, 2004 11:59 pm

Hey, just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying your story. I think you've managed to write a fic that is well-crafted and extremely enjoyable. Great job.

Marilda
 


Re: Amazing

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun May 23, 2004 8:31 am

I guess i read 3 update but att this one part in ur last update, i had tears in my eyes!:happycry Wow ur writing is so damn great...me wants more...heheh and i cant wait for the night and their making-out:blush



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

Stroke of Luck
 


Update and New Post

Postby WillowFever » Sun May 23, 2004 6:40 pm

Mikaelah Braenna



Hey Mikah.....you are such a sweetie...wow...chills...I must be doing something right....I mean it's not like I'm planting crooked plants or something...:wink



And I have nooooooo idea who you could be referring to...hmmmmmm....but Oh Yes!!! Naughty Tara will be around soon....as you know...



Thanks for everything hun.....can't wait to paint!!!



As usual, wonderful update!







Apache138



Wow...still making chills....I'm so glad that you are enjoying the fic....thanks for the wonderful feedback...I hope you enjoy this next part as well...





wimpy0729



Wimpy....hun...how are ya....thanks so much for the feedback and yes...my tiara is still intact and shining ever so brightly....lol....however there isn't much teasing in this next update....:wink



justkazy



Woohoo....ahhhhhhh...chills, chills and more chills..I love it...thanks hun....







photographer02



Hey...wow...gonna save it huh??? Well thanks so much...I'm glad you are along for the ride...



sam darls



Thanks Sam.....you're a sweetie...





veiled isis moon



Hey Michelle....yeah..you can never go wrong with straddling....just something classic about it....LOL



MissKittys Ball O Yarn



Thanks.....and I love you name....cute...



marciam





marcia....thanks so much for the wonderful feedback....I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story and I hope you like the next update as well...



Marilda



Wow...thanks so much...



Stroke of Luck8. Vixen



Leave it to you to be ready and waiting for the make-out session...:heart ....thanks a bunch....and I hope you enjoy...







Okay.....I would just like to say...once again...thanks to everyone especially my wonderful....wonderful...beta...Mikah..who keeps me in line...thanks sweetness!!!!



And now......I think you all should know that I'm posting this as an NC-17 (go ahead..get happy) just to be on the safe side.....I hope you all enjoy....as always...Happy Reading...



:peace

WF











Wild Horses

By

WillowFever





Part 35:        Now







Willow fumbled with the keys to their room. It was just too hard to concentrate with Tara kissing her neck.



“Hurry…”



Willow closed her eyes and shivered as Tara’s sultry voice whispered in her ear.



“I’m…trying…”



Finally, the key slipped into the lock and Willow opened the door. The two girls rushed inside and Willow quickly found herself pinned up against the now closed door.



“Do you have any idea how much I want you right now?”



Willow could only close her eyes and rest her head against the door as Tara latched onto her neck…sucking hard.



That’ll leave a mark…



Tara’s hands slid under Willow’s top and the red head felt her knees go weak as the blonde teased her already swollen nipples.



“Oh God….Tara…”



Tara couldn’t wait to taste Willow’s sweet skin. She pushed the red head’s top up and quickly undid the front clasping bra that was keeping her from what she wanted. She felt her mouth water just before she wrapped around Willow’s left breast. If sucking Willow’s neck caused the red head to moan in pleasure, it was nothing compared to the sounds she was making now.



“Yessss….harder…”



Tara felt Willow’s hand pushing on the back of her head.



Mmmm…what Willow wants…Willow gets…



Willow felt like sliding down the door into a puddle on the floor. If it wasn’t for the strong hold that Tara had on her, she was sure she would have.



Tara directed her attention to Willow’s other breast as her fingers slid down the red head’s tummy. She could feel Willow tremble beneath her touch and it excited Tara to know she had this effect on her lover.



She slowly unbuttoned Willow’s jeans and slid her hand just barely inside.



“Willow…”



The red head opened her eyes. She was certain she heard her lover whisper her name. Tara smiled at the deep green orbs shining at her. She watched as Willow moved her lips but no sound came out.



“My sweet…sweet…Willow…”



Tara leaned into the red head…pressing her body against Willow’s as she slowly ran her tongue over a very red…very sensitive earlobe. She heard Willow whimper at the touch.



“Willow…”



Willow’s body was on fire and the sound of Tara’s voice was almost enough to send the red head over the edge. The blonde’s warm breath against her ear sent shivers down her body as she waited to see what Tara would say next.



“Are you wet for me Willow…”



Willow grabbed hold of Tara in an effort to remain standing as the blonde whispered softly in her ear.



“I think you are…”



Willow felt Tara’s fingers slide underneath the waistband of her panties. The anticipation was driving her mad with need and want. Tara closed her eyes as she slid into the warmth and wetness of her lover.



“Mmmmmmm….yes….so wet…”



“Ungghhhh….Tara…”



The blonde kissed her way down Willow’s neck…then she softly kissed across the red head’s chest…lingering on two beautiful breasts before heading further down Willow’s trembling body.



Willow wrapped her fingers in Tara’s hair. She felt her pants and undies slowly sliding down and the unmistakable feeling of warm breath against her thighs.



“You smell so good Willow…”



Willow shivered as Tara ran her fingers up the back of her legs…over her hips and down her front. Tara couldn’t hold back any longer. She leaned in and took her first taste of Willow. It wasn’t enough…for either of them.



Willow wrapped her right leg over Tara’s shoulder and cried out as Tara latched onto her…sucking with wild abandon. Her head slammed against the door but neither one seemed to notice.



Willow felt her entire body trembling with desire. She looked down and found Tara…eyes closed…pleasuring herself as she pleasured Willow. The very sight of Tara touching herself sent Willow over the edge.



She cried out her release and just when she thought her body had reached it’s highest peak, she felt Tara enter her with two fingers…the same fingers that she had used to pleasure herself.



“Tara…”



“Come for me Willow…”



The blonde felt Willow tighten around her. She slowed her movements as she tenderly ran her thumb over the sweetest spot she had ever felt. Tara watched as Willow slipped over the edge…feeling her warm release on her fingertips.



“Oh yes….that’s it…”



Willow felt herself return to her body. She couldn’t stand any longer, nor did she have to. Tara scooped the spent red head up in her arms and carried her to the bed. She laid her precious cargo down and then situated herself next to the red head.



“I love you…”



“Love you too…”



Before long both women had slipped into a peaceful slumber; two spent bodies wrapped around one another. Their chests rising and falling in perfect sync…







Tbc…….













WillowFever
 


Re: Part 35: Now

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Sun May 23, 2004 6:56 pm

You know, Rach, if you do not leave that poor plant alone, I am going to make you transplant it next weekend! :fit2 ~~That thing is so adorable!)


You have no idea who I am referring to? hmmm... sounds like we better see Mike. :devil



Now... onto the update... against the door? At this point I decided you deserved a :bow without even reading any farther. Seems like I recall a conversation between a few people about something of the similar nature... except there was a wall involved instead of a door. Let me guess... you have no idea who those people were either, eh? :lol Once I finished the update, I decided a :thud and a :drool needed to be added as well.



~Mikaelah

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: Part 35: Now

Postby tinnakaren » Sun May 23, 2004 7:26 pm

Wow WillowFever...that was just, for a lack of a better word, wow. As have all your other updates been. It's such a wonderful, emotional story, and you tell it just right. Thank you :)

--------------------------

Tinna Karen

-tölvunörd í fyrsta ættlið

tinnakaren
 


paper cups and plastic spoons

Postby MissKittys Ball O Yarn » Sun May 23, 2004 7:29 pm

hmm.....that was....quite indescribable.... :bow



I meant to say something....anything...constructive or otherwise...but as it turns out you have left me....speechless....and that never happens.... :flirt



cant wait for the next part!



xoxo

Emms

MissKittys Ball O Yarn
 


Re: Part 35: Now

Postby pipsberg » Sun May 23, 2004 8:04 pm

Holy god! *GULP* That was so freaking hot... awesome update, once again. You never dissapoint ;)

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

Edited by: pipsberg at: 5/23/04 7:04 pm
pipsberg
 


Re: paper cups and plastic spoons

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun May 23, 2004 8:17 pm

Oh WF, Thank You, Thank You! Nope, no teasing there. Hey, thanks again!



That was definitely :bow -worthy and :thud - worthy. OMG



I think I should've had more gear prepared -- forgot to place my thudding pillows around my chair -- OUCH! I'm okay, yep, much better now.



I know there was some definite steam-age from my ears this time, and um, maybe somewhere el.... hey, I gotta go now. :D



And did I remember to say thanks!!



Hugs!!!



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


Re: paper cups and plastic spoons

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Sun May 23, 2004 8:41 pm

oh.my. :shock :clap

so many great updates.

more naughty goodness?

:pray :thud wow :bow



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

she had eyes bright enough to burn me --conor oberst

her BRIGHTeyes
 


Re: paper cups and plastic spoons

Postby justkazy » Sun May 23, 2004 8:51 pm

oh....my...god:thud



absolutly amazing update...wow..against the door!



wonderful writing..again..hehe:clap



:D



"I'd cry..i would die if i lost you"-Alex Parks...I love you, baby!

justkazy
 


Re: Part 35

Postby marciam » Sun May 23, 2004 9:45 pm

Quote:
Willow felt her entire body trembling with desire. She looked down and found Tara…eyes closed…pleasuring herself as she pleasured Willow. The very sight of Tara touching herself sent Willow over the edge.
:drool There needs to be a sizzlin' hot smiley because that's exactly what this update was. Wow.



Marcia

marciam
 


Re: Part 35

Postby sam darls » Mon May 24, 2004 2:31 am

wow..that was so..ummm:thud and :drool ..very nice. Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Part 35

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon May 24, 2004 12:19 pm

Wooohaaaa that was hot:drool cant get enough of them...more pls:pray :bounce



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Part 35

Postby grrrgirl32 » Mon May 24, 2004 1:16 pm

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grrrgirl32
 


Re: Part 35

Postby veiled isis moon » Mon May 24, 2004 4:32 pm

You've turned me into a big, sploggy puddle! I have no words!



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Part 35

Postby DreamsToDream » Mon May 24, 2004 7:48 pm

That was....that was.... very drool worthy! I rate it :drool :drool :drool :drool

D2D

DreamsToDream
 


Replies..

Postby WillowFever » Wed May 26, 2004 1:14 pm

Mikaelah Braenna



Hey sweetie....I just can't help myself when comes to teasing you about your plant....or just teasing you for that matter....and speaking of Mike....have you heard from him...I'm way beyond worrying about him.....



I thought you would appreciate the door scene...:bounce I knew you had a soft spot for that....:wink







tinnakaren



Thanks hun for the wonderful feedback...it keeps me going....woohoo...



MissKittys Ball O Yarn



Wow....speechless huh....I guess I'm doing something right...

Thanks....





pipsberg



So glad you liked that update...hehehehe....there is more to come....





wimpy0729



Well...Wimpy...you are welcome....welcome...and welcome..lol...glad you liked...and if I were you I wouldn't be putting that gear away just yet....





her BRIGHTeyes



hehe...thanks hun....glad you liked....





justkazy



Thanks....I think everyone is liking the whole door thing....hmmmm....maybe we could try the hood of the car next....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........



marciam

1. Blessed Wannabe





Wow....sizzlin' hot....I like that!!!! Thanks hun....glad you are enjoying...woohooo



sam darls



Thanks Sam.....glad you are still enjoying....



Stroke of Luck



Thanks.....:bounce



grrrgirl32



Hmmmmmmmm......thanks? you're message didn't come through hun.....try again....



veiled isis moon



Sploggy puddle...wow...I will take that as a compliment....hehehe....thanks....



DreamsToDream



All those droolies.....ahhhhhhhh.....thanks hun...I'm feelin' so excited right now....







Okay....I just wanted to say thanks to everyone....you really made my day....sorry bout the delay in updating...my work schedule has changed once again....and it will be kinda rocky til the end of next week....so please hang in there with me....



I am working on the next update and it's about 1/3 finished....so hopefully by tonight or early morning it will be posted....thanks for being so patient....I love ya'll....



Okay.....I'm gonna get :kgeek with the rest of this update...



til then...take care....



WF



:peace

:pride

WillowFever
 


Re: Replies..

Postby littlecrazy80 » Wed May 26, 2004 1:34 pm

A big WOW for all updates I missed.



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber

littlecrazy80
 


Re:

Postby Whinse » Wed May 26, 2004 7:21 pm

I must admit that this has become one of my favorite fics! It's just so adorable! Very well written, I might add. But really, who can resist a story with horses, anyhow?



Keep em coming!

Whinse
 

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