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Re: update

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Jun 27, 2004 8:51 pm

That was SO cute! I absolutely adore it because it's just so cute, and it's too bad that you won't be updating for a while, but I really liked this chapter.

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

Tempest Duer
 


Re: update

Postby SJ » Mon Jun 28, 2004 1:20 am

Cute update :bounce

SJ
 


wow!

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Jun 29, 2004 3:22 pm



this is amazing!

I've just caught up with this fic, and I can't get enough of it!

it's beautifully written! can't wait for more!





:)



~Arwen

Arwen276
 


Re: wow!

Postby everbreeze » Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:57 pm

Hey ONYX LOVE~! just wanted to say HI~! and to tell you that the new fic is AWSOME~! well take care~!

everbreeze
 


Re: wow!

Postby amazonaa » Wed Jun 30, 2004 2:30 am

WOOOHOOOOO!!!!!!!!



Well its about damn time. now we have to get to the other stuff.



good job. keep going.







brittney





Quote:
Kiss this axe, bitch!---Tara "Bargaining part 2"

amazonaa
 


Re: wow!

Postby meowkitty2002 » Wed Jun 30, 2004 9:17 am

I have to agree with everyone else here.



:thud :sheep :thud WOW :thud :sheep :thud



It is so great that our girls finally admitted to each other how they feel. And that first kiss is always the most special. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more!



Kat

"I like my demons. I consider them close personal friends. In fact, we enjoy each others company immensely."

-Amber Benson, "Chance"

meowkitty2002
 


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Postby willohand » Mon Jul 05, 2004 10:27 pm

:banana and :pinky and by the way thank you.we are so not worthy:bow but keep it up with the wonderful updates.and that kiss and everything leading up to it...

willow seeing tara`s clothing all over and the fact that tara was naked :thud willow stumbling backward out the room...:yikes was classic wilow at her cutest.

more please

willohand
 


Re: update

Postby onyxsundrops » Fri Jul 09, 2004 3:45 pm

Thanks everyone for reading and/or replying. I’ll try to do individual replies later, I just wanted to post this before I went out.



****

Part 13



****



From the corner of her small room, Tara spoke quietly into the telephone as she watched Willow lay across her bed, apparently lost in deep thought.



I kissed a girl. Tara-girl. Girl. Tara. Soft. Pretty.



If only the blonde knew how shallow Willow’s ‘deep thought’ went.



Smiling to herself as she finished speaking with her father, Tara continued watching the redhead from afar. Her first kiss with Willow had been amazing, everything she dreamt it would be. Tender and sweet, she could still feel the gentle lips upon her own.



“Okay, I’m ready,” Tara announced, smiling as she approached the bed. Fighting the urge to rush forward and claim her girlfriend’s lips once more, the blonde bit her lip to silence her hormones.



“Aw, do we hafta?” Willow asked with a tiny pout. She looked up pleadingly into amused blue eyes. Tara grinned down at the still pouting and partially smiling redhead.



“Yes, we do,” the blonde kneeled down to brush the hair away from Willow’s forehead as her friend’s head lopped from side to side in disagreement. “We do.” Tara insisted, giggling as she lowered herself fully onto the carpeted floor.



Willow’s head hung off the edge of the bed with her bright eyes staring upside down at Tara. Wordlessly, the redhead continued staring at the blonde, smiling. Her lips slowly began to tremble as her smile grew and the soft laugh barely stayed behind her grin.



“What?” Tara asked, subconsciously smoothing back her ponytail to make sure the stray pieces of hair were in place.



“You have the cutest ears.” Willow chuckled but because of the position of her head, it sounded more like a gurgle.



“I do not.” Bashfully, the blonde ducked her head. Her bare ears burned red without trusty blonde hair to cover them. Tara’s face soon brightened to the color of her ears and she pressed them to her head. “They stick out.” She removed her hands and felt her ears spring back.



“No they don’t... stop it.” Quickly flipping onto her stomach, Willow reached out to stop Tara’s hands before they had a chance to cover the adorable ears again. “They’re cute.” She scooted closer, nearly halfway off the bed but still having balance. “Can I touch them?” The redhead asked, eagerly.



Although incredibly embarrassed, Tara nodded as if she couldn’t refuse the redhead. Willow let out a gleeful squeak and within seconds her hands were touching the blonde’s ears. “Am I weird?” She asked as her fingers gently pulled.



“Um, you’re really ...,” Tara paused, searching for the right word, “quirky.”



“Is that nice for ‘crazy’?” Willow arched an eyebrow while continuing to caress her girlfriend’s ears. Tara made a noise that she assumed was a ‘no’ and the redhead shrugged.



In actuality, the blonde wasn’t sure what she had just uttered or tried to. She had forgotten how extremely sensitive her ears were and the way Willow was touching them, set her skin to prickle.



“Okay, I’ll stop now,” pulling back, the redhead smiled and sat up. It wasn’t that Willow had a fetish and made it a habit to fondle people’s ears, she just found Tara’s too cut not to touch.



Blushing anew, Tara looked up and found herself facing Willow when the redhead slid down to join her on the floor. The blonde dipped her head once more but felt Willow’s eyes seek her own, and succumbed to the green.



“I like everything about you,” the redhead whispered.



The sincerity in her voice made it hard for Tara to breathe. Breath hitching, caught on the dryness within her throat, the blonde traced the curve of Willow’s jaw. “You’re so beautiful.”



“Quirky, yes. Beautiful, n-.”



“Willow?” Tara paused after silencing the redhead, then smiled. “Kiss me.” The plea bounced against Willow’s lips, begging for entry.



Anticipating blue searched the redhead’s face before landing on Willow’s approaching mouth. Soft, yet thirsty lips gently pressed together as if it was the first time. Magical. Synchronized. Lips slowly regained function, moving together, teasing, savoring the familiar taste.



The kiss lessened into scattered pecks, but never lost its intensity. Only breaking apart to allow breaths to catch and smiles to form.



“Sorry, I just...,” Tara leaned her forehead against Willow’s, “had to...,” lips stretched, briefly connecting again, “kiss you.” The blonde finally got out before her eyes flickered down to her wristwatch.



“We should go.” Unmoving, Tara sighed, unwilling to let go so soon.



“Uh-uh,” Willow shook her head, firmly disagreeing. “They won’t even know if we’re missing.” Her pout returned as she referred to their last seminar for the week.



“Our names are on the list.” Although she tried to be the voice of reason, strangely, Tara had yet to move an inch. “Besides, it might be fun.” She added, mentally willing her legs to work and her mouth to stop reaching for Willow.



“This fun?” The redhead murmured, her lips barely grazing over Tara’s.



“Uh,” Tara sputtered. Her brain told her to do the responsible thing, while her hormones kicked and shouted ‘no’. “We’ll have the whole weekend.” She answered as her hormones lay temporarily defeated in the corner, while her lips screamed and struggled to jump across and onto Willow’s mouth.



The other girl’s ears perked as she considered Tara’s last words. “Okay, we’ll go... after,” Willow paused to moisten her dry lips, “another kiss... or two... okay, three.” She grinned when Tara playfully rolled her eyes.



The first kiss was soft and soothing but too short. The second was longer, sweeter, and left both sets of lips tingling. And the third...



Peach. Vanilla. Powerful. Beautiful. Sensual.



Breathe.



... was heaven.















onyxsundrops
 


Re: update

Postby veiled isis moon » Fri Jul 09, 2004 4:25 pm

Awww......wow.......love how you ended that update. Their kisses are like heaven ...........and they're soooooooooo into each other

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Update

Postby Shy One » Fri Jul 09, 2004 6:41 pm

Ooooooooooh.........Yummy!! :heart



Great Update!! :pinky

More, More, More! :bounce



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: Update

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Jul 09, 2004 7:40 pm

I have to ditto the yumminess and sweetness. Very nice.



I gotta add that the ear thing was absolutely adorable. I can just picture Tara's cute ears and Willow being so bold and forward about wanting to touch them. But oh, I think Tara really liked it too, with the skin prickling and um, maybe other things?



Loved the ending -- the kisses, man, just beautiful. Great job!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: update

Postby pipsberg » Fri Jul 09, 2004 8:34 pm

Oh this was great! I love the second kiss, aka the kiss after the first! Great job, please keep the updates coming.



:peace

pipsberg
 


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Postby willohand » Fri Jul 09, 2004 10:27 pm

i wonder?im only saying this once.this update was,in a word, SWEEEEEEEEET!:thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud .

alrighty now... :kiss1 was:blush . :kiss2 is even mopre.now we have :willow asking for kisses?:sheep and the ear touching...:stop :D :sheep .it must be:luv :flower .

:flirt and:blush . and tar`s reaction to willow playing with her ears was :eyebrow and im like :hmm .

this is so great that they understand what they feel for one another and are able to express it so openly to one another.

next update please.

willohand
 


Re: reply

Postby sam darls » Sat Jul 10, 2004 3:16 am

That was so incredibly sweet and I love how you ended..so lovely :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Update

Postby amazonaa » Sat Jul 10, 2004 9:44 am

awwwwwwww. that was so cute.







good job.more please.







brittney







Quote:
Kiss this axe, bitch!---Tara "Bargaining part 2"

amazonaa
 


Re: Update

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Sat Jul 10, 2004 11:46 am

I believe that there are few words in the English language that can justify what a wonderful chapter ending that was. You made me fall in love with this story all over again. :clap



Keep up the great work!



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

***

If homosexuals dont reproduce, why are there so many of them?-Jim David

BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: Update

Postby ShyTemptress » Sat Jul 10, 2004 12:49 pm

Yay... I leave for a week and get a update yay....! It was great by the way...

-Shy Southern Temptress:kitty

ShyTemptress
 


Re: Update

Postby bluehippocampus » Sun Jul 11, 2004 1:01 am

You know that was so cute and sweet. Wonderful indeed. :heart



BH

bluehippocampus
 


Re: Update

Postby SJ » Sun Jul 11, 2004 4:32 am

Lovely update :bounce

SJ
 


Re: Update

Postby Artemis » Sun Jul 11, 2004 7:27 am

Willow's 'deep thought' made me laugh out loud :) Who wouldn't be dazed and dazzled in that situation? And I agree completely, Tara has the cutest ears... Very sweet chapter, I look forward to more, even if it does involve having to go to seminars instead of staying in. I'm sure they'll find some way to have fun regardless.

Artemis
 


Re: Update

Postby soluna350 » Mon Jul 12, 2004 11:46 am

Update!:pinky I liked Willow's thoughts too:rofl and all of the kisses:heart

soluna350
 


Re: Update

Postby Arwen276 » Mon Jul 12, 2004 12:25 pm

TOO CUTE!!!





Sigh





I so want more, they're really adorable!





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Update

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Jul 12, 2004 3:01 pm

Great update! :D They are so adorable. :heart



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Fred the Elephant

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Update

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Tue Jul 13, 2004 11:44 am

There is not too much that I can say about that update that someone else has not covered already. It was very sweet and loving.

I am curious though, since this is the last seminar and the final weekend, to see how you keep them together when the time arrives for them to go home.

Wonderful update... more soon, please?



~Mikaelah

That'll teach me to challenge her. ~Tara ... ~Something New by Ophelia11

Mikaelah Braenna
 


happy happy joy joy

Postby everbreeze » Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:31 am

Well this girl is MUCH satisfied. Great story and hope you right more is in place. So update soon~!

everbreeze
 


Re: happy happy joy joy

Postby onyxsundrops » Thu Jul 22, 2004 7:26 pm

:::Blows enough dust off to write this::: Sorry it's not an update, but I'm working on it (for both fics). Between my job and helping friends move, I haven't had much time to do much of anything. Nevertheless, thanks for all of the great feedback and everyone for reading. It's much appreciated.



In addition to Mikaelah, I'm sure some of you are also wondering how I plan to keep them together once the two weeks are up and the answer is... well, I haven't thought far enough to have a solid plan, but I have some ideas. Anyway, thanks again.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: happy happy joy joy

Postby soluna350 » Fri Aug 13, 2004 12:36 pm

waiting for that update :fit2



:geek

soluna350
 


..

Postby RaVeN » Fri Aug 13, 2004 11:40 pm

i have no doubt you ill figure it out, i just found this fic and its rally nice. maybe I missed it but how old is tara? willow was happy she was going to be a senior and tara said she remembered the feeling but i never knowticed a age named or even hinted or maybe im just sleepy..:peace

RaVeN
 


Re: ..

Postby onyxsundrops » Sat Aug 14, 2004 5:50 pm

Sorry for not clearing this up in the beginning. Willow's 17 and because Tara has just graduated, she's 18. Hope that helps Raven. Thanks for reading.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


..

Postby RaVeN » Sat Aug 14, 2004 9:34 pm

lol not that it mattered I guess but thanks.. i just like little trivial details I think.. can't wait for more:peace

RaVeN
 

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