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What Makes You-Short Story

Postby writerfreak » Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:14 pm

Okay so this was actually a dream that I had a while ago. I got the idea of turning it into a short story for the Kittenboard so here goes.

Title: What Makes You
Author: writerfreak
Email Address: writerfreakchick@aol.com
Rating: PG or PG-13....I'm not really sure which, one of the two.
Disclaimer: The idea was mine. Everything you recognize probably doesn't belong to me. It belongs to Joss Whedon or ME.
Feedback: Yes, please, if you will. It might be my first attempt but don't be afraid to be harsh if it really sucks.
Summary: A day at the park, I guess, with family, but it mostly focuses on W/T of course. It's a one-shot fic. Very short. Unless I think up ideas to continue it. Season 5 sometime. Oh, and its un-beta'd. Unless you count my sis reading a paragraph.
Notes: Again this is just something I dreamed up one night. The idea of it anyway. I decided to turn it into a fic. Oh...and the lyrics...I wrote them a while ago.

What makes you happy
What makes you smile
What makes you wonderful
For a while
What makes your soul sing
What makes your heart ring
What makes you good enough
Love


Willow felt her heart skip a beat at the soft melodic voice singing along with the radio. They were on their way to Sunnydale Park for a nice relaxing day with the family. Xander and Anya were in Xander's car right behind them and Buffy would be joining later with Dawn after Buffy got off of work. The nightly fight of demons and vampires had been pretty slow of late, which usually signalled an oncoming apocalypse. To the Scoobies it meant take a day to rest and relax because there wouldn't be many coming up for a while. That is what sparked the idea for this little adventure. Now they were pulling up at the park and Willow certainly wasn't going to let this day go wrong. They all needed this and it was about time they had it. She turned off the engine of the truck and got out slowly, taking in all the fresh air and getting the picnic basket and blankets from the bed of the truck.

The walk to the nice shady spot under the gang's favorite tree was fairly short. Filled with laughter as they jeered and joked to relieve the tension in them all. The unsureness of whether or not they would have to avert another end to the world. The group spread the blankets and sat slowly, taking time to enjoy all of it, every ounce of the happy time together. To just be a family.

“What's on the menu, Will?” Xander asked, anxious to get to the food. They were all starving, having spent the morning making all of the tremendous amount of food. Tara had done most of the cooking of course. She was the best cook out of everyone. From her magically delicious pancakes to the absolutely delightful fruit salad waiting for them as dessert. Soon everyone had sandwiches and salads with their sodas or juice.There was little talk as they ate. Most of it was random questions about their days, or lives. Catching up. With Willow and Tara so busy with college, and Xander and Anya's planning of the wedding, then Buffy so busy with work and Dawn no one really had much time just to catch up on daily life. The four of them shared the quiet and the conversation in relative peace waiting for Buffy and Dawn to show up. As they did the conversation picked up immediately, Buffy talking about work with Xander, and Dawn talking about school and homework with Willow and Tara, but mostly with Willow. Tara watched quietly as Dawn talked. She watched Willow's face as she listened intently. The changes, as she either contemplated or answered questions, the rapt attention. Lunch wrapped up pretty quickly and wound down in to a relaxing moment as everyone started to enjoy dessert.

Looking back it was Xander who started the food fight. Trying to throw grapes to Buffy to catch in her mouth. Until one of them flew by her and hit Willow then fell on Tara. Everyone started picking at the fruit and tossing it in every direction. Tara picked up the wayward grape and threw it in Willow's face, then got up and ran. Willow quickly gave chase. Running after her around the see-saws and the swings. Around the whole playground onto the path that led back to the picnic area. It was there she caught up with her. Tara tripped as she ran, Willow catching her from behind and pulling her fast against her body. Tara let out a slight squeal as she was caught, before she started laughing. She turned as her feet hit the ground. Both girls laughing wildly and enjoying the feel of being in each others arms. Willow kissed her, short but incredibly sweet. Then they joined hands and walked slowly back to the picnic spot. Xander was napping with Anya's head resting on his shoulder. Dawn was passed out as well with her head resting on Buffy's lap and Buffy was watching over them all. Cautious even in daylight of all the baddies that could be out there.

Willow and Tara sat slowly, like they had before. Willow's back against the tree and Tara's head resting in Willow's lap. Both fell lightly asleep. Peacefully asleep. Buffy being the only one to stay awake to watch over them. The nap wasn't long, everyone woke up within an hour after falling out. Just a power nap. Getting ready for the night, when it was back to the darkness and fighting evil. By mutual silent agreement, they all started gathering up the picnic supplies and walked slowly back to their vehicles. Packing it away and hugging each other quick see-ya-laters. The others climbed in their cars as Willow and Tara took to the truck.

“That was nice.” Tara finally said to break the silence in the vehicle. “Yeah, it was fun. We all really needed that. A day to just be us, ya know.” Conversation died slowly, lapsing into silence as they enjoyed the ride. Willow lightly grasped Tara's hand in the center of the seats. They pulled up at the house after only a few minutes. Getting out and walking hand in hand to the door. Once inside they went their seperate ways. Tara headed toward the kitchen while Willow went up the stairs to help Dawn with the homework they had discussed earlier. Everyone feeling much lighter having spent the day together. Just being family. Tara stood at the sink thinking. Slowly she smiled, and reflecting, softly saying to herself, “Yeah, that's what makes you.”


The End.
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:02 pm

Absolutely. The way a day should be, even in the Buffyverse. In a way, the opening ebach scene in "Buffy vs Dracula" is one of the hardest for me to watch.
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby Willowtree252 » Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:27 pm

:pinky So sweet and full of happy times :flower
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby writerfreak » Wed Feb 07, 2007 4:49 pm

Thank you so much anyone who came in to read this. I hope you all liked it.

DaddyCatALSO: I agree it is the way a day should be. So much going on in their daily lives they needed something to go well, not Dracula to roll in. Thank you so much for reading.

Dianneswillowtree: Had to be light and sweet. Of course. Thank you so much for reading.

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby Emms » Wed Feb 07, 2007 5:07 pm

That was incredibly relaxed and immensely sweet. Everyone together... just hanging out and enjoying each other... What a wonderful visual you painted. I loved it.

brava, sweetie!

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby diamondforever » Wed Feb 07, 2007 5:19 pm

Awww, that was adorable. It's such a different take from the usual doom and gloom of the Buffyverse, and so needed. We so rarely get to see that side of them. :)

Awesome!
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby writerfreak » Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:33 am

Wow. I'm glad people are liking it. I really expected to get no replies or anything because I think I suck. I had that waiting to be posted for months before working up the courage to do so.

Emms: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you loved it. I figured a nice relaxed atmosphere that would take all the tension away. Something people might, maybe, refer back to when they needed to relax themselves as well. (btw, no one ever told me how special it feels to get feedback from one of your favorite authors for the first time, wow.)

diamondforever: Thank you, I wanted it to be a rare side. Just to be relaxing, not a side seen pretty much ever. :blush

Thank you again to all who took the time to read my little story.

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby mangled_monkey » Sat Feb 10, 2007 8:01 pm

Little story is right!

You painted the scene beautifully, you always have had a way with words... but it's so short!

I think I speak for at least a few lurkers when I say that you need to post more stuff! LONGER stuff!

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby writerfreak » Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:17 pm

Though I say this everytime, thanks again to anyone who read this. It means a lot to me.

mangled_monkey: Yes, very little. Thank you, I tried to write it the way I thought it should be. And despite my way with words, you know my shyness takes over that a lot more often than not and I convince myself it sucks and not to post. As for posting more, longer stuff. I don't know, I've got a bunch I've worked on for the longest time but I don't think they are good enough, though you are right, I do want to. I'm now a feedback whore. I love it. Thanks so much for reading.

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby Useful_Oxymoron » Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:28 pm

Aw, that was lovely. :) Of course, it wouldn't be the scoobies if a quiet picknick hadn't turned into a massive foodfight. :)

A day without demons, vampires, evil wizards, record producers, nazgul, etc... If anyone deserves that, it's Willow, Tara and the rest of the gang.

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby SJ » Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:30 am

Great short story.
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby lilkitty1389 » Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:48 am

Great story!
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby CrazyTaraWitch » Tue Dec 18, 2007 6:25 pm

this is really cute...a nice little snapshot of their lives
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Feb 07, 2008 6:39 pm

I'll tell you what makes me you getting off your ass and writing again you got plenty of time to do it kenny. :kgeek
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby Taralover » Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:20 pm

This is so sweet :wtkiss and nice.
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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby writerfreak » Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:55 pm

Thank you Useful_Oxymoron, SJ, lilkitty1389, CrazyTaraWitch, Dianneswillowtree, and Taralover for reading this little bit of fluffy goodness.

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Re: What Makes You-Short Story

Postby fhiwda » Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:55 pm

cute
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