FF: Unexpected Consequences (Thread III)

[Jennpurr]

Hey Lisa,



I know you've gotten my messages, so I don't know much else to say. Except, take care of you and I hope you are doing well.



Glad to hear about your cousin, that she's doing better. To say I'm not looking forward to the update, that would be a lie. So, I can't wait to see what's up next.



Take care, girl,

Jen

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Tara: Shhh, darling.

Willow: I can't do this.

Tara: We can do this.

[BethanyB3]

Hi Lisa, so happy to see that you are back and that RL is hopefully getting a bit better. Best wishes to your cousin for a continuing recovery. Blessed Be

[Scout]

Hi Lisa. So glad to hear your cousin is making progress. I can't imagine how hard that must be for all of you. Thanks for the update about the ending - and a sequel. WooHoo! I know you'll treat the girls well in their future lives.



Thanks and take care!

[rose of the moon 87]

Lisa, its good to see you! I'm sorry about your cousin and I'm glad shes getting better. All the best wishes for you both. I'm glad you have wrote more but sad that its the ending. Hopefully you can write more fics in the future about the great love of Tara and Willow. Your really good at it. And thank you for replying to my question. Its one I've been wondering for a while and I've been contemplating a sort of experiment thingy but I'm only 15 so I most likely have no clue what I'm talking about... but who knows. may be someday I'll meet a gay scientist and talk them into tinkering with it. lol. Well, good luck with the fic and best wishes for you and yours.

[Puff]

Hey Lisa great to hear that we are expecting an update sometime and I am sure the ending will be wonderful. Also woo hoo for the next story, sounds great and I look forward to reading it.



Hope RL calms down for you soon

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[Lisa of Nine]

Okay, I have... an UPDATE!



Actually, it's TWO updates, and the second update completes this story.



Thank you for all the support with this story and for all the support you've given me through some very rough times. Enjoy the last two sections. The first is chapter 40, and the second is a long epilogue. Just to keep it simple, the epilogue address calls it part 41. (If the font looks small, try changing your browser VIEW to a larger font size. It looked tiny on my screen but that fixed it.)



Now for the WARNINGS!

Chapter 40 has a graphic battle scene. If you notice any of the villains resembling anyone from the public eye, it must be pure chance. I tell my story with complete integrity with the story being my only concern. Any suggestion that there is an asshole-o-phobic message in my story is being too sensitive. ;-)



The Epilogue has graphic scenes of childbirth. I tried to make it icky, scary, funny, and real. WARNING... child birth is not pretty!



Enjoy. Let me know what you think, and thanks again!

Lisa



www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon40.html



www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon41.html



***Edited to add... if you haven't seen SHINNEN's drawings of Brianna, they are fantastic. Check them out in the pens thread!

Edited by: Lisa of Nine at: 7/15/02 1:11:54 pm

[willowphile410]

YAY!!!!!!!!! I can't tell you how happy I am to see this update!! *Runs off to read*



Lisa, this was a wonderful ending to a tremendous story. You know, that Keeper and his assistant seemed awfully familiar to me...I'm sure if I think about it long enough I'll figure it out... Thanks a bunch and I can't wait to see what's coming next from you.



-- Ali

"Straight,” Joel huffed, rolling his eyes. “That’s like, two drinks and a light switch away from being totally gay" - Final Exam by tommo

Edited by: willowphile410  at: 7/15/02 1:49:48 pm

[Jennpurr]

Ooooh... UPDATE!!!



**Scampers away to go read**



Jen

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"Talented Tongued Tara." Willow snickered.- "Unexpected Consequences," by Lisa

Edited by: Jennpurr at: 7/15/02 2:03:54 pm

[Pudds]

What a wonderful ending...I must have read the first 39 chapters about a dozen times and to have the ending is fantastic.

Thank you so much for writing this amazing story...and I look forward eagerly to the new one!

[Robin]

I haven't read it yet, but seeing that the chapters were here made me feel like christmas and birthday together on one day!



Thanks!

[Thanatopsis]

Happiness. That was so great. Thank you for finished this. I can't wait for the next one.

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Too many of us live desert lives. ~Charles de Lint

[WiccansIllusion]

Lisa,

awesome update. I'm so sad that it's over but sequals are good, very good.

'It's good to be a chicken casserole'-Sass, answering darkness

'My heart is cleverer then I and it knows what to do.'-MC Legends of the Kiss

[Bobos Mom]

Lisa,

Thank you for sharing the vision. I look forward to the next burst of creativity from you! Be well,

BM

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TARA: Willow and I always know how to find each other!

ANYA: With yoga?

[Tiggrscorpio]

Lisa,



Wonderful ending to an absolutely brilliant story. I loved all your digs at Joss and ME. Well incorporated and well deserved. Looking forward to the continuation of this lovely story. Thanks so much!

*****

She's my everything!

[foreverpiper]

This was the awsomest story I've ever read! I loved it all the way through and the ending was pure brilliance! Thank you for gracing us with such a magnificant piece of work.

[darkmagicwillow]

Thank you for the finale. I've loved this story along with all the others on your site.

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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit. "   "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

[katydid]

Wow Lisa...you just absolutely amaze me. This was the perfect ending for such a long and epic fic. Hard to believe that this started back around Christmas time. I don't think the birth process was too graphic...you made it how it all really is. I rarely hear new mothers at work say how fulfilling labor was...lol. They all go pale and say they are never doing that again. The whole fic was great...but I wouldn't expect any less from you. Can't wait to read your next installment in your W/T timeline.

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She practically had genuine molded plastic stamped on her ass.

[Puff]

I loved the end of the fic Lisa, the breast feeding part had me giggling away. Even if I held my breath for the whole birth. I am really looking forward to the sequel to see how Brianna grows up and how Willow and Tara cope with her.



Thank you for finishing this story up and posting it for us

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[Scout]

Well, I'm never giving birth, I know that now. I was on the fence before, but now I've decided.



This was awesome and so funny. Some of Dawn's and Anya's lines had me on the floor. And the breastfeeding was hilarious.



Thanks for giving this wonderful story the ending it deserved. I think this whole story goes down as a classic. And I can't wait for the sequel!

[CaptMurdock]

Now that was an ending worth waiting for...



I have to say, when Diana said it wasn't working and Tara yelled "Well, no shit!" I burst out laughing. I can just hear Amber saying that. Delivery is not only a joyous event and a huge amount of stress, it's also a comedy of errors. The breastfeeding was funny too. Anybody who says that women just "instinctively" know this stuff is a liar. It's never that easy.



Lisa, I am in awe. You are fantastic.

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"I love you all. I love you more than life itself. You're all f***ing mad." -- Ozzy as "The Dad," THE OSBOURNES.

[greebo75]

What can i say, i love this fic, it's been outstanding from start to finish, and i've enjoyed every second of it. The final chapters were well worth the wait, the last chapter in particular was so funny and heart warming.



I just wanted to say thank you for sharing



Kel

[nika]

Lisa I'm so glad that you decided to give this an ending.

Not just an ending, a perfect one. I'm sorry rl has been giving you so much trouble altely. I hope things are better. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. It's just magnificent. Thank you.

[LeatherQueen]

Oh, what a beautiful ending, Lisa! This was a fantastic story and the ending was wonderful. Thank you for posting it and I definitely look forward to reading more of their story.

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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

[Shinnen]

Welcome back, Lisa!



I hope that RL is treating you much better now.



This morning I wake up and BAM! NEW CHAPTERS!!! Wow! and YAY!



I haven't read the final 2 chapters yet but I've already copied them to text format for comfortable offline reading. But no matter what, it's always worth the long wait with your fic.



I'll be off to read the final 2 chapters! And thank you so much for thinking my drawings of Brianna was wonderful!



CheerZ

Shinnen

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When I Am Standing On My Head, The Sky Is So Deep And The Sea Is So High.

[Amymlc]

This is the best fan fiction I have ever read!! I have it saved on my computer and have read the first 39 chapters like four hundred times. I was so excited to see the updates I literally screamed and scared my girlfriend! I bow down in awe to Lisa's writing ability!!!! I love your quirky sense of humor and your story lines are soooo...creative, and just unbelievably wonderful!!

They were right, I'm a homo--But I'm a Cheerleader

[momentum]

Lisa, you are amazing. You capture Willow and Tara's love beautifully and perfectly in each and every story you write, and I am very thankful that you have shared your talent with us.

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Elise
Reno Dakota there's not an iota of kindness in you

You know you enthrall me and yet you don't call me

It's making me blue

[OhGroovetasticOne]

Lisa,

First of all just let me tell you that you are my favorite W/T writer hands down. It was only about six months ago that I started reading fanfic. I started with reading what you had written of Unexpected Consequences, then I went on to read all the fic you have on your site, nonstop, until I finished reading everything you have available to us. Thank god I’m a fast reader so I only missed one night of sleep. Your fic has continuously been novel quality, and a whole hell of a lot better than what we’ve seen ME put out this season. I don’t think I can possibly describe how well you write, but I will say that that I have read all of your W/T fics countless times over, have them saved on floppy, and on my hard drive. When I think of Willow and Tara, I no longer think of what ME tried to make us swallow this season, I think of your Willow and Tara. The conclusion was well worth the wait and like all your fic had that perfect mix of humor, edge, and ultimately love. Thank you so much for finishing this story. I eagerly await your next story about our favorite girls.



With much gratitude and adoration,

KT

but then what kind of scale compares the weight of two beauties, the gravity of duties or the ground speed of joy? tell me what kind of gauge can quantify elation? what kind of equation could I possibly employ?

[Jennpurr]

OMG... WOW... that was just beautiful. Thank you so much, Lisa! Awww... now I wanna go read this all over again, starting from the beginning. I actually started reading this again the other night.



Hee.... I loved panic Willow. Running around the halls naked. That was frickin hillarious. And then the ending, with Brent. That was just... too funny.



All in all, I have absolutely loved the ride, with this fic. Thank you so much for continuing with it. I'm glad you are going to keep writing. And I'm definitely looking forward to the sequel.



You know, you should consider writing professionally. I can't wait to see more of Brianna. Without being repeat-o gal too much, thank you for giving us such a beautiful Willow and Tara. You write them so well, and you can feel the love they have for each other, everytime.







Jen

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"Talented Tongued Tara." Willow snickered.- "Unexpected Consequences," by Lisa

Edited by: Jennpurr at: 7/15/02 7:47:14 pm

[4WiccanLuv]

Thank you so much for this story, I really >needed< it!

The ending was well worth the wait. I loved Tara in labor. Her swearing made me laugh, it was so uncharacteristic, yet believable! OMG, and Brianna with the red hair and blue eyes, how adorable. I must say, I truly love they way you capture Willow, all cute and lovable. I can't express how much I appreciate that you shared this wonderful story. Can't wait for their next adventure!

- Dime con quien andas y te dire quien eres -

[GiveMeChocolate]

Thankyou sooo much for this wonderful story, you write beautifully and have captured Willow and Tara perfectly. I look forward to reading 'Milestones' , I can't wait to see Willow and Tara cope with Motherhood!

Axe, not gonna cut it